ISOM

Finally got a chance to peruse this and the quality is definitely there. You see the artwork is much better than the competition. I think where it could really excel is in dialogue. Like real urban writing just because there has been so much quality lingo, hiphop, comedy and sports trash talk over the years that there must be so many lines to draw from. Peter Parker was always know for his jokes during fights, but I would think that top ballers and top boxers would have been way more funny and engaging, as well as hack from like Black Twitter or other places like WSHH. I’d love compilations of great lines and dialogue from those sources. There’s nothing like the trash they talk.

I saw the comic they tried to compare Isom to and Isom’s art was way better. I also like Eric’s motivational panels that say things like We Will Win and stuff like that. Like a top coach, which is another thing that is needed today is motivation that you would get from a top guy like a Doc Rivers or someone like that. Maybe July could even talk to top coaches and kind of get their speeches and stuff to get hyped. Would be so good in a comic book. I think the readers would appreciate all that in literary form.